Excellent video Mafia... I really did enjoy it.
Ok here is a little constructive ideas so you can take it for what it is worth. I really loved the video.
At time = 1:20 I wonder if you could somehow isolate the audio and turn down the loud grating noise of something rubber? against the video system/sled
At time = 2:30 I was really starting to wonder how deep we were, temperature of the water, location (Gulf Side vs Ocean side), nearest city... etc
At time = 3:40 Identify the fish (Hogfish correct?)
At time = 4:45 You did go over the dive info some giving me the depth... good but maybe more toward the beginning of the video would be better???
At time = 5:15 Identify the Angel fish species
At time = 12:30 You state something like 'Alexander Barge was used to Dump debris onto the ocean floor' Maybe something like 'The Alexander Barge was used to transport old bridge materials out to the drop off destination for the formation of an artificial reef'. I just think that it sounds a little better and less like a bunch of trash was accidently/haphazardly pushed overboard.
At time = 14:00 your friends get to see the pair of Grouper but you don't... maybe it is because they are out ahead of you and spook the grouper away. Try to see if they will keep better behind you so that you can film the big fish on the next dive?
Also you could use the term "frequent Denizens" when describing the Groupers hanging out on the wreck. I think that is a fun word and is often associated with fish hanging out on wrecks.
At time = 20:00 and 20:25 You could Identify the fish
At time = 23:20 Identify the pair of fish
At time = 29:30 and 29:45 Isolate the audio and lessen the loud rubber squeak a bit.
The video was super incredible so I hope that you take my ideas only in the best intentioned way. I would love to get a good copy of it on HD DVD sometime so that I can show it to my wife. She does not yet have her SCUBA cert yet but has expressed interest several times. I may have to get her in a class now that the weather is getting warmer.
I really did like the lightheartedness and playfullness that was interjected in the video. Diving is great fun.
Keep up the great work. :thumbs:
Later
JustOneMoreTank
